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102959SATURNV
inevitable closure.














fall from the sky into
you; a pure electron stream
me; stage 3 rockets firing to break the pull/ mother~earth
the ions below are not aware of us,
nor are the stars, our distant kin, invisible

while this alone reinforces us; halfway between the
infinite and recessive as
time
stands
still

caught in the wake of our black hole kiss,
an accretion disk concerned only with the inevitable closure
an event horizon on the verge of



it's cosmic, this surface tension, like wet skin in the rain
if ever I had forgotten the sorrow, it was now, it was here as
we kissed in the starlight%
















© 2002 jesse michael renaud
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Given 2002-01-30
Saturn V by frail escorts the reader on a cosmic voyage take takes on sensual tones and seduces as it progresses. Mesmerizing! Selected by `faithwalker. ( Featured by $devart )
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~ShadyBlues Feb 23, 2010  Student Photographer
this gets a dd and only 6 favorites what is this nonsense
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:iconminuitserenite:
you really do know wht its like to [want to] love, dont you? *sigh*

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:iconnous-sommes-vous:
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so damn cool; i love your poetry! i want to print it out and inscribe it on my skin!
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:icondaeira:
This is goddamn incredible. I especially liked the first stanza, and your line-breaks in it. You write about love in such a refreshing and wonderfully new way it blows my mind. And the references to cosmos, atoms.. again: I adore it. Amazing.

Just wondering though, what does the numbers in the titles mean?
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:iconpixel-dirt:
it would be nice to forget our sorrows... beautiful poem...

ben
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:iconmelocopter:
no maybe about it this one is my fav!
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:iconsummerheart:
So beautiful. This one may be my favorite.
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:iconfuctuptink:
i love this..... your style is so awesome and you convey your thought and emotions so well...
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spread your wings and prepare to fly...
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:icongirlfromverona:
I don't usually go for "love" poetry, but this is truly wonderful. I love your style. :) (Smile)

http://www.geocities.com/theveronarelaps e -- The Verona Relapse
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